Jay Bernzweig, a Hollywood pro with 20+ years in the film industry, offers expert analysis and detailed, useful notes to make your screenplay as tight, compelling and salable as possible.

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Benefit from my experience as a studio executive, professional story analyst and produced playwright and screenwriter.

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Introductory offer:  10 pages, $20.

Snapshot critique of premise, writing quality, opening of script. Email for details.

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